Tuesday, 30 May 2023

Purdah - Imtiaz Dhraker( Explanation)


Savitribai Phule Pune University


Department of Education and Extension 


Group Members - Diksha Bardiya, Bhavana Late,  Harshada Hodshil, Dipsmita Das, Sushant Koravi

Subject - English

Sub-incharge - Mr. Mahesh Mali

Topic- 'PURDAH ' (Poem)

Poet- Imtiaz Dhraker 



About Poet: 

Imtiaz Dharker (born: 31 January 1954) is a Pakistan-born British poet, artist, and video film maker. She won the Queen's Gold Medal for her English poetry and was appointed Chancellor of Newcastle University from January 2020.



One day they said

 she was old enough to learn some shame. 

She found it came quite naturally.


The poem 'Purdah' it focuses on a significant phases in the life of girl growing into youth in the Muslim community in the youth her physical beauty attracts the attention of people which is improper in conservative society. Therefore they means the society says that she must maintain the decency and decorum of young lady according to above line she was old enough to learn some shame.




Purdah is a kind of safety.

The body finds a place to hide.

The cloth fans out against the skin

much like the earth that falls

on coffins after they put dead men in.


According to stanza, Purdah is a sign of alienation from one's own self.Women who are in Purdah are emotionless like dead man inside a coffin.Not only women's body but also spirit, their mind and individual agency are buried inside Purdah.Darker seems to be anonymously conscious of Purdah's tremendously negative bearings, which deprive and take away a young woman of the opportunity to experience her life entirely and confined her to limited space she traverses.




People she has known

Stand up, sit down as they have always done.

But they make different angles

in the light, their eyes aslant,

a little sly.


According to poet , when veil is imposed, it becomes a turning point in a girl's life.

Sexuality is always reminded to them which creates an awkwardness.

People have started looking at her in a different way which made her feel uncomfortable with her body and made her (all women belonging to Purdah Community) shy about herself.




She half-remembers things

from someone else's life,

perhaps from yours, or mine -

carefully carrying what we do not own

between the thighs a sense of sin.


This stanza suggests that the woman is struggling to find her own identity and is instead living through the experiences of others. The phrase "half-remembers things from someone else's life" implies that she is not sure what memories are her own and what memories belong to others.

 The metaphor of "carrying what we do not own between the thighs" suggests that the woman is carrying a sense of guilt or shame for living through the experiences of others. The stanza conveys a sense of confusion and uncertainty, as if the woman is struggling to find her own voice and is instead living through the experiences of others.




We sit still, letting the cloth grow

a little closer to our skin.

A light filters inward

through our bodies' walls.

Voices speak inside us,

echoing in the places we have just left.


In this stanza poet says,According to men, women's aim is to keep her family satisfied.

She has no identity of her own even her sexuality is not her won.




She stands outside herself,

sometimes in all four corners of a room.

Wherever she goes, she is always

inching past herself,

as if she were a clod of earth

and the roots as well,

scratching for a hold

between the first and second rib.


This stanza suggests that the woman is struggling to find her place in the world.

 She feels disconnected from herself and her surroundings, as if she is constantly searching for something that she can't quite grasp. 

The metaphor of the clod of earth and the roots suggests that the woman is trying to take root and find stability, but is having difficulty doing so. 

The phrase "inching past herself" implies that she is constantly moving forward, but is not sure where she is going or what she is searching for.




Passing constantly out of her own hands,

into the corner of someone else's eyes... while the doors keep opening

inward and again inward


This stanza suggests that the woman feels like she is constantly being watched and judged by others. 

The phrase "passing constantly out of her own hands" implies that she feels like she has no control over how others perceive her.

 The image of the doors opening inward and again inward suggests that the woman feels trapped or confined, as if she is constantly moving in circles and can't escape the scrutiny of others.

 Overall, the stanza conveys a sense of frustration and helplessness, as if the woman is struggling to find her place in a world that is constantly judging and defining her.



Refrence link

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Imtiaz_Dharker

https://youtu.be/Lxt49UxvOSo

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/purdah-1/


Friday, 1 April 2022

Dear miracle ❤️

1 April 2022,
Bhavanalate

Grandma has spent this childhood in love care and  Dessert.
 



 Grandma, what  can i  say about this?  You must have experienced this love of my grandmother! My whole childhood was spent with my grandmother
 I used to call my grandmother mother
 She had wrinkles on her face.....

 Life

 My grandmother spent her childhood in Pimpalgaon. She got married at a very young age.


 Story

 I have lived with my grandmother since childhood. She loved me very much. If there was a fair in the village, she would bring me food and give me money.
 My grandmother used to sing very nice charolais and devotional songs. Her voice was very sweet. There is a temple near our house where she used to go every day for Pooja, Aarti.
 Once I went to my uncle's village, my grandmother had an accident, her condition was very serious, she was blown away by bss  bus. She had 360 stitches on her leg. When I came back from my uncle's village, my grandmother was having a hard time getting up and sitting down. She couldn't do anything, so we stood  on our farm. My parents lived nearby. After a few days, she recovered and an argument broke out between her and my father. Then she didn't stay with us. And my dad didn't go to her, and neither can I. A few days passed and then we started talking to Grandma again. I used to visit her before going to college. She used to pay me for meals every day. One day I went to college without meeting her.
 I went to Aji because I didn't take tiffin that day. She was asleep. She was in very poor health. I thought she was in constant pain. She was hungry all day .So I called Baba but he did not answer.
 Then I went to call them. We came home. She was in great pain. We took her to the hospital. Doctors said she had suffered a heart attack. She didn't have much time.
 Went to see her. She looked at me and smiled and turned her hand over my head. She was taking my name until her last breath. She took Baba's hand and finally took care of the children. And she let out a sigh .................

                    I look up too the sky
                             And talk to you.
                     What I Wouldn't
                              Give too hear you 
                       Talk back .
                     I miss your voice. I miss 
                                 your laughter ,
                      I miss Everything
                                           About u❤️🥺

                     
Reference link
https://www.all-greatquotes.com/in-loving-memory-cards-i-look-up-to-the-sky-and-talk-to-you/

Monday, 28 March 2022

letter writing



28 march,
                      LETTER WRITING
Name-bhavana devidas late
Program-B.Sc.B.Ed
Cource code- BSc101
Department- department of education and extention
Sub- English
Guide- mr.Mahesh Mali.

Definition:
Letter is written message conveyed from one person to another person through a medium.

there are certain parts of the letter which remain the same. They include:

Sender’s address
Date
Greeting or Salutation
Body of the Letter
Subscription
Signature
Sender’s Address
The writer’s complete postal address has to be mentioned at the beginning of the letter on the left-hand side of the paper. This lets the receiver know where you wrote the letter from.

Date
The date is written just below the sender’s address, and It lets the recipient know when exactly the letter was written. 
The date may be written in any of the following ways:
4th July 2005

July 4, 2005

Greeting or Salutation
The Salutation depends on the relationship between the sender and the receiver.

To members of your family and friends, it could be Dear Father, My Dearest Friend, Dear Uncle, Dear Diana, etc.
To Business people or any officer of higher rank, it could be Dear Sir, Dear Sirs, Sir/Ma’am, etc.
Body of the Letter
The message that you want to convey is stated in the body of the letter. The style, however, depends on the type of letter you are writing. The style of a friendly letter differs completely from that of a business letter or an official letter, but there are certain points that apply to both formal letters and informal letters.

Generally, when you draft the body of your letter, see to that you divide it into short paragraphs, according to the change in the subject matter. Use simple and direct language that is easy to comprehend. Put down all your points in a logical order. Mind your punctuation; incorrect punctuation will alter the meaning of the sentence completely.

Subscription
The subscription helps you end the letter in a polite and courteous manner. The subscriptions change according to the type of letter you are writing. It can be written as Yours faithfully, Yours lovingly, Yours sincerely, With love, etc.

Signature
The signature or the name of the writer should be written just before the subscription.
__________ Letter can be formal and informal.


*Formal letter


A formal letter is a professional letter, which is written in formal language, in a prescribed format and in the stipulated format. This letter is mainly used for professional communication. Informal Letter. An informal letter is a personal letter, which is written in a friendly manner to someone we are familiar with.

* How to write a formal letter?
1..Write your name and contact information.
2. Include the date.
3. Include the recipient's name and contact information.
4. Write a subject line for AMS style.
5. Write a salutation for block style.
6. Write the body of the letter.
7. Include a sign-off.
I. Proofread your letter.

*Informal letter

An informal letter is the type of letter you would write to someone you know, for example a friend or family member. They're written in a style that is more friendly and familiar in comparison to a formal letter which follows strict rules about layout and style.


*How To Write Informal Letter?
1. Address of the sender.
2. Date of writing a letter.
3. Address of receiver.
4. Salutation/Greeting.
5. Body of the letter.
6. Conclusion.
7. Signature of the sender.

Difference between formal and informal letter.
The main difference between formal and informal letters is that formal letters professionally address someone, and informal letters address someone in a personal way. Other differences include: Formal letters follow a specific format, while informal letters can follow any format


Some letter writing links
https://youtu.be/l1D6xQ2ecR4
https://youtu.be/fThoN6YYNcQ
https://youtu.be/m6TuXixyg9E







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